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Wednesday, April 26, 2023
Hi Reader,
When you're preparing to write and send donor comms, it might be helpful to think of your supporters as sleepwalking to the mailbox or the inbox.
Life ain't easy, usually, so we sometimes sort of sleepwalk through the hard parts, which keeps our brains on an emotional leash.
One way to wake up and let loose is with a good song.
Your fundraising messaging will at times need to sound serious or formal. But that approach is seldom memorable. It rarely delivers a love tap to your warm-fuzzy-happy bone.
Meanwhile, reading a popular song title or lyric is like how a nice tickle feels for a person who enjoys being tickled. It accesses some treasured mental real estate. It activates some good ole fashioned nostalgia. Lo, verily, it rocks.
So look for opportunities...
E.g.,
Instead of "We appreciate you" β try
See the difference? Feel the difference?
"We appreciate you" is basically boring, serious, chilly, formal, forgettable. Also, it starts with "we" and ends with "you." (Prioritize your audience, not yourself.)
"You are the sunshine of our life" is seriously warmer, fuzzier, happier. Even if your cause deals with a grim topic, you're still communicating with real live people who prefer to feel better rather than worse, where possible.
5 ways might you apply this in your donor comms:
Remember: donors are people too. Like you and me, they appreciate good vibrations. So β whenever possible β it's good to make them feel like waking up dancing! ππ½
For your brain, heart, and funny bone...
Until next time: May your fundraising writing be filled with soul β so your donors feel all giving-groovy and bust a philanthropic move!
All our best,
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